I hope I’m not going to make mistakes showing others ones ^^’.

So first, Maxime (aka Fumble)’s Blog :

1. Article : Who I Am

• Mistake : A letter is missing here -> “avaiable soon…” => “available soon…”

And… Well that’s it (there was a lot of things to read, and some people already found the main mistakes)

Next ! Melanie’s Blog :

1. • Article : Welcome
   • Mistake : Well, just an apostrophe that shouldn’t be there -> “I’ll add news article about what I learn’t !” => “I’ll add news article about what I learnt !”
2. • Article: Search String about Artistic director
   • Mistake 1 : “I choose one of theme” => “I choose one of them“
   • Mistake 2 : “[...]the role of a Director Artistic.” => “[...]the role of an Artistic Director.” It’s a frequent mistake in her article :S.
   • Mistake 3 : I think that the correct form of “To do that, I was on Youtube” is “To do that, I went on Youtube”
   • She often use the verb “to see” while I think that it should be “to watch” :S. Example : “See it : [link to youtube video]“. Am I wrong?
   • The sentence “the innovation never has the end” is strange, but I’m almost sure that it should be “innovation never has an end”.
   • Mistake 4 : “You can saw the interview of the Artistic Director of Anaheim Ballet.” => “You can watch the interview of the Artistic Director of Anaheim Ballet.”

That’s all for her !

We continue with Nassim’s Blog :

1. • Article : Artistic director
   • Mistake : “This is a funny video which deals about the Recruitment of the artistic director.” Is that shouldn’t be “This is a funny video which deals with the Recruitment of the artistic director.” ?

Next, we have Nastasia’s Blog :

1. • Article : My first step on a blog
   • Mistake : “i’m am as hopeless in english as in internet stuff!” => “I’m as hopeless in english as in internet stuff!”
2. • Article : Introducing myself
   • Mistake : “you can heard my presentation here: [...]” => “you can hear my presentation here: [...]“

And finally, Nicolas M.’s Blog is perfect, no mistakes (or they are well hidden) !
I hope that I’m not going to have more ennemies :S…

See you later !